6 do's and don'ts of a personal statement

Spencer started working on his personal statement in April. Finally during a family reunion the end of June he finished. It was a rough beginning but slowing we put together a statement that we were proud of. 

Here are a few hints from USA News. You can read the entire article here. 

To help ease the uncertainty surrounding the personal statement, here are some do's and don'ts to follow.

1. DO make sure your statement addresses these two important points: your reason(s) for wanting to pursue medicine and your appeal as a candidate to medical schools. It is important to cover both these points; often, many statements only answer one of them (usually the first one). These types of statements risk getting lost in the shuffle with inundated admissions committees searching for those whose unique qualities shine through their application materials.

2. DON'T choose a subject matter simply because you think it will impress. Admissions officers have read it all: "I want to help people," "I want to make a difference," etc. They would prefer to read a much more personal story of learning and growth, regardless of the topic—though it's probably best to avoid controversial topics. You never know who will read your essay!

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3. DO broaden your list of potential essay themes. Believe it or not, this is your moment to be creative! This is not only the time to think outside the box, it's also the time to review certain aspects of your life, including your experiences (school or non-school related), motivations, and personal qualities.

You don't have to include all of these things, but organizing your thoughts into these categories will give you a better picture of your list of potential essay topics. You can also combine categories in formulating your topic.

4. DON'T rehash your résumé or other parts of your application in your essay. All too often, the personal comments section quickly becomes a summary of accomplishments that are listed elsewhere in the application. Doing this could squander a potential opportunity to show another side of you not reflected in transcripts or recommendation letters.

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5. DO give yourself enough time. Because so many components are involved in composing a strong personal statement, it's important to start at least the first step—brainstorming—early on. Each year, a substantial number of applicants express some regret that they felt rushed to submit early and lost critical time in working on their statement; when they realize how much time it involves, it's often too late.

Give yourself enough time to write multiple drafts and have them read by others; remember that professors, premed advisers, and writing centers at schools might be very busy with others in the same boat this time of year. 

6. DON'T gloss over any potential red flags. If you have something on your record you think may raise questions when admissions committees review your files— a difficult semester, low science grades, or a gap in your educational history—it's important to use the personal statement as an avenue to address these issues.

The upside to this is that the personal statement is your chance to describe what lessons you learned from what happened. Sometimes, applicants who have been through unfortunate circumstances may be inclined to justify or defend what happened. Keep in mind that acknowledging mistakes and highlighting what you learned from them can have a profound effect on even otherwise marginal applications.

Now our advice....

-Start early

-Start with lists. List all of your strengths and then find stories that show those.

-Be yourself. It should be polished but it should also be real. Make sure it is readable and shows your personality

Good luck!